I asked a few people what they thought about my magazine and what to improve
Sarah said: That my magazine was really eye catching and all the pages linked together also you can instantly tell its an indie magazine. The only improvement i can say is that the rest of the magazine has paint splatters and your cover as a spray paint so maybe change it to a paint splatter instead. Overall I really love this magazine and nothing else to improve.
Carla said: What i like about this magazine is the fonts and how they link with her stage name and also the colour scheme works really well also I really like the photographs that you took it really ties in well with the indie music genre.
Kate said: I love the front cover, however I do believe that there could be some improvements that could allow the page to improve. The font used for the price is playful and fun, however I do not think that it fits in with the rest of the page. The image is cut out will however in places it can be seen that it had been edited. Your contents is brill and follow the front cover really well, however I believe that there should be more information, such as a competition and put the articles within the magazine in to groups such as ' Main features' and 'Upcoming Events'. Your spread is brilliant, fits its purpose and draws the readers eye.
Hamish said: That I really like the front cover however I believe that something else should be going on in the background the same for the contents page as well, I really do like the contents page i see nothing wrong with it but maybe make the picture on it a little less neat.
Jack said: The front cover is great don't change anything but the contents page background should be a texture or something more going on so its not just a block of colour the double page spread the block colour works with the effect in the background but the page split should be less neat.
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